The story started off with the main characters all choose to end their lives on the same night, on the same roof.
Here is looking at life at the point that you wanted to end it.
While I respect people deciding to off themselves. It is the writer's wish to save these characters by inventing stuff that make life worth living for.
That's would be tough.
Only at the first 10 pages. But the tone is fine and the characters are realistic enough.
Starts with a 4 stars and see how it goes.